Winter! Winter smells like delicious ice cream. Winter tastes like frozen berries. Winter looks like melting snow. Winter feels like the soft warm sheep. Winter sounds like howling wolves dogs and puppies.
Wow, what a great poem, I can feel the warmth from the soft sheep while listening to the howling wind outside. A great picture was created in my head. What are you going to write about next?
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Wow what a great poem.cyrus
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ReplyDeleteGret poem chanel i can fell the warmth when read your poem from your friend kahciar
ReplyDeletegreat poem chanel when i read it it makes me feel nice and warm.Rieya
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