Swimming is my favourite thing because you get to hop in the pool. You get to swim backwards and back again. The pool is blue. My togs are black and blue. I have pink and butterfly goggles. By Eclipse
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Very clever writing Eclipse, you really do love swimming don't you :)
ReplyDeleteEclipse you are Awesome keep up the good swimming
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