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Thursday, September 22, 2016

Mitchell

Once upon a time there was a Olympic race. all of the animals were so nervous. The elephant was extremely enormous and the tiger was amazing. The race was amazing. All of the people were so excited for the tiger to win. The tiger won the Olympics race. The jaguar came second the the koala came last.

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  1. Talofa lava, my name is Aryan and I am a student in Setoga class at Hay Park School. I really like how you made lots of sentences. . It made me think of me making 15 sentences in room 3. Have you thought about doing a screencastify and ink onto the sentence. If you would like to see my learning, please visit My Blog

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  2. Talofa lava, my name is Aryan and I am a student in Setoga class at Hay Park School. I really like how you made lots of sentences. . It made me think of me making 15 sentences in room 3. Have you thought about doing a screencastify and ink onto the sentence. If you would like to see my learning, please visit My Blog

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  3. Talofa lava, my name is Mandita and I am a student in Setoga class at Hay Park School. I really like how you said Once upon a time there was a olympic race . It made me think of I was watching the olympic race . Have you thought about Doing more sense to describe the olympic race starts of the race . If you would like to see my learning, please visit My Blog

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